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From the darkness of your shadow
My mind has found its release
I’m free to choose my life
I’m free to choose my being

I keep a loose eye
Checking back every so often
Seeing how pitiful your life has become
Yet I knew you would amount to nothing

It was you who turned me cruel
You who made me smile at death and agony
And the nightmares still invade my mind
As the past creeps back into my thoughts

How could I have let you get so close?
Let you into life
Into my home
I would turn away when you hurt those closest to me
But never more
For now I am free to choose my life

I have happiness once again
I do not live my life according to the past
I’ve become something more
More than you could ever be
For I always knew you would amount to nothing
©2005-2009 ~purgatori
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Author's Comments

I was listening to KoRn when I wrote this. I really like it.

Preview pic was made by me! Isn't it pretty????

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:iconlucid-lucifer:
wow...really cool piece..i love the preview pic too ;)

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge." - Einstein
:iconsammybaggins:
Amazing poem, your poetry is always so beautiful.:nod:And your previews are awesome, too.^^

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I apologize beforehand, I'm not the best at making comments that actually make sense. ^^;
:iconpurgatori:
Thanks a ton sammy! I always enjoy your comments!

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“That’s Mrs. Lord of Gondor to you!”
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I'M A PERVY BOROMIR FANCIER!
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I'm a proud Lord of the Rings addict
:iconpurgatori:
Thank you so much!

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“That’s Mrs. Lord of Gondor to you!”
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I'M A PERVY BOROMIR FANCIER!
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I'm a proud Lord of the Rings addict
:iconchrizzyfurr:
oh i really like your poem im so terribly sorry i havent been able to read al your work lately i made a new policy to check da once a day now cause i really missed a lot of great poems and stories. i have been ill and all and the dev pile whas so much that i had to delete them to see the end of it im really sorry i deleted yours as well.
im very glad you didnt lose your touch in writing this wonderfull poetry and you are still able to capture the meaning of your poems in this sort of way really great you have improved a lot.
for your picture its really great nice work you did that in photoshop?
:hug::glomp: anya,sam

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In every story...
There are..
Anger...
Heroisme...
Magic...
Sadness...
Friendship...
But...
Above all things...
LOVE...
:iconnabeeya:
Oooooo... Prettyful. I love the poem too! :heart:
:icondark-forge:
Critique Discouraged
i understand y
V Nc
no Critique needed to tel u that
:iconlucid-lucifer:
always a pleasure;)

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge." - Einstein
:iconjendy-4:
Sweet yo. Sweet.

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"Remember, when the lights go out... If you feel something poking you, do NOT struggle! They like that..."

"I know what you're thinking Dillon... You're thinking, "But Mr. H*, I'm retarded!" And you are, but..." ~ Mr. H. The Art Teacher.

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